SABAU, Daciana

[Daciana Sabau]

The Revolution Has Begun

"There's no need to call me sir Professor."



FULL NAME: Daciana Luca Sabau
NICKNAMES: Ciana, Ana, Luca, Loca, Cia
AGE: 16
BIRTHDAY: 10/31
SEXUALIY: Herterosexual
BLOODLINE: Half Blood
HOUSE: Gryffindor
YEAR: Sixth
JOB: none
SIDE: Harry's
SPECIES/SPECIAL ABILITIES: Parslemouth


"You don't know what I'm capable of, you don't know what I've done!"



GENERAL APPEARANCE:
Daciana is short for her age. She is only five foot one inches. Her hair is a gorgeous shade of chocolate brown ad comes to the middle of her back. It flows freely most of the time and has a nice wave to it. In the sun it sparkles and you can see strings of golden coloring in it. Her eyes are a light hazel and when you look into them they hold you. Once you lock eyes with her you seem to can't look away.

Her skin is a honey beige as she spends a lot of time in the sun. Her body type is slim but athletic. She only weighs one hundred and five pounds. She is curvy though and has every curve a woman should have. Her eyes are framed with dark, black lashes and she has few freckles. On her left shoulder blade she has a set of scars that look like claw marks going down.
MOST LIKED FEATURE: Hair
MOST HATED FEATURE: Her scar
HERITAGE: Romanian and Spanish
ETHNICITY: Caucasian


"The mind is not a book, to be opened at will and examined at leisure."



GENERAL PERSONALITY:
She is a very fun loving girl who loves to be out doors. Daciana does have trust issues though. Her father is a werewolf and growing up with him and his anger issues impacted her greatly. She tends to shy away from people at first and you may find her sitting by herslef outside a lot of the time. She has trust issues and when you first meet her she can be very quiet and stand offish.

Once you get to know her though you will find she is a very fun loving girl. She loves to listen to music and she loves writing songs. She plays a guitar and sings. She loves to be around the ones she loves and would do anything for them. She is very close to her brother. Since they went to different schools it was hard to talk and stay in contact but they always managed it. He always protected her growing up and he still does now. Daciana couldn't picture life without him.
HOBBIES:
1. Writing Songs
2. Playing guitar
3. Singing
DISLIKES:
1. Arrogant people
2. Gloomy days
3. Dark Magic
LIKES:
1. Sunny weather
2. Music
3. Tranfiguration
4. Jokes/Pranks
5. Relaxing
FEARS:
1. Wolves
2. Her Father
SECRETS:
1. Contimplated killing her fathe while he slept
2. Wishes she was born into another family


"I enjoyed the meetings, too. It was like having friends."



GENERAL HISTORY:
Daciana was born and raised in Romania. Her mother was a girl born into a small farming community. Her father was a werewolf from Barcelona, Spain. She had a brother who was a year older than her and she always followed him around when they were young. She considered him her best friend. Growing up with a werewolf as a father isn't very easy. He had anger issues and most of the time he would take it out on Daciana. She could never really figure out why he hit her or yelled at her so she always tried to make it better but it always ended up angering him and she would get hit again.

Travis would try to protect her and take some of the attacks but their father would always end up going back to Daciana. Their mother was too afraid to say anything and too afraid to leave so they stayed. When Daciana was only eight years old her father came home. It was the first night of the full moon and he had refused to take his wolfsbane potion because he was drunk. He started to transform right before their eyes. He realized what was going on and tried to leave. Daciana got in the way right as his wolf took over. His claws swiped out and caught her on the left shoulder blade, slicing her open like ribbons. He finally left the house as Daciana bled on the floor. Travis quickly swept her up and took her to the doctors. He healed her as best they could but she would always have a scar. Since the doctor was a family friend Travis and her mother begged him not to report Ramone. They needed him for the income in the household. The doctor agreed and he never got punished for malling his daughter.

When she was eleven she was invited to attend and study at Beauxbatons Academy of Magic. She left for school and constantly wrote to her brother. He would try to write about happy things in his letters but she could tell that there wasn't a lot of happy things to write about. Travis himself attended Durmstrang. He had been invited there two years before she had been invited to Beauxbatons. After six years of attending the school Daciana came home for summer break to find her mother packing and her father drinking his heart away at the kitchen table. Her mother had finally found the courage to leave. They were moving to the United Kingdom. But that meant that she would have to leave Beauxbatons and transfer to Hogwarts. She had heard nothing but good things about Hogwarts but she still hated starting in a new place. They were leaving Romania and so was her father. He was moving back to Spain to join a pack of werewolves. She hoped he would get some help but she doubted that he would.
FAMILY:
Travis Sabau: Older Brother
Alina Sabau: Mother
Ramone Valdez: Father


"Make way for the heir of Slytherin, seriously evil wizard coming through..."



ROLEPLAY SAMPLE:
The light was shining brightly in the sky as they made their way to the train station. Daciana loved days like this. She wished that she was in the forest back at home running around. But at the same time she was happy that her mother had finally gathered the courage to leave her father for good. She looked back at her mother and squeezed her hand. They were in London heading to Kings Cross Station. The new start of the year at Hogwarts was just around the bend. Her mother and brother were helping Daciana with her luggage through the station. She was nothing but smiles. They had finally got rid of the one thing that made coming home frightening. She would never again be afraid to come home for holiday breaks. She looked ahead and ran though the portal to the platform to the Hogwarts train. Travis and her mother were right behind her.

The platform was crammed with students and familes running around and trying to get everyone stowed away. Daciana looked around in wonder. Her hands shook slightly. She was nervous. She had never seen so many people. All the different accents and different luggage. There were meows from cats, sqeaks from rats, and screeches and hoots from the many owls. It was a mad house. She hated leaving her friends back at Beauxbatons. She had really felt like it was starting to be home. Now she would have to start all over again. Travis handed her her owl and wrapped his arm around her. He smiled down and kissed her on the head. Daciana said her goodbyes as the whistle blew. She would see them at Christmas. She waved goodbye until they were out of sight. She then made her way to find a cabin to sit in. They were all full except for one who had only a couple students sitting in it.

"Um, excuse me. Do you mind if sit here?"



"Reading between the lines, I’d say she thinks you’re a bit conceited, mate."



NAME: Courtney
AGE: 19
GENDER: Female
YEARS ROLEPLAYING: 7 years
LOCATION: Hyde Park, NY, USA
HOW DID YOU FIND US: Google.

[EPONINE DOMINIQUE DOLOHOV]

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hi i'm linders
please insert corrections that need to be made
thank you! To Improve:

• Looks: It's really nice that her hair is long and her eyes sparkle, but you've really told us very little what she actually looks like. So if you could, perhaps, elaborate on her other features such as she has a big nose or one eye is larger than the other or perhaps something of that nature? Because no one looks perfect, surely, there's more flaws than just those scars you barely skim the surface of in description.
  
  
• Personality: You mention more than once that she is a fun loving girl. Why not try hilighting something else of her personality? Surely, there's more to her than the fact that she loves to have fun. Her personality makes her seem more like a Hufflepuff than a Gryffindor. Where's that Gryffindor bravery?
  
  
• Special Ability: If she's a Parslemouth where did she get it from [it does seem as if it is an inherited trait i.e. Salazar and Morfin and Marvolo and Tom Riddle, of course.], and why didn't the hat decide to put her into Slytherin instead of Gryffindor?
  
  
• History: No, you don't say she's a werewolf as a listed special ability, but you say that her father mauled her. Unless, it was something like Greyback did to Bill that would indeed make her a werewolf [i.e. it wouldn't be a full moon and he wouldn't be fully transformed into his 'other' form]. At this time we are not accepting original werewolves, so if you could edit that part of your application, that would be awesome!
  
  Also, please elaborate things other than her relationship with her family. Did she make any/lose any friends on the move? If she was raised in Romania why did she go to Beauxbatons? That school is for children in France? Plus you can't just transfer into one wizarding school from another one - that never happened in the books. So either she always went to Hogwarts or she never did.

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