MALFOY, Draco Lucius

[DRACO MALFOY]

The Revolution Has Begun

"There's no need to call me sir Professor."



FULL NAME: Draco Lucius Malfoy
NICKNAMES: None
AGE: 15
BIRTHDAY: May 11
SEXUALIY: Heterosexual
BLOODLINE: Pureblood
HOUSE: Slytherin
YEAR: 5th
JOB: Student
SIDE: Death Eater
SPECIES/SPECIAL ABILITIES: Human
CANON: Yes


"You don't know what I'm capable of, you don't know what I've done!"



GENERAL APPEARANCE: Draco has platinum blonde hair that barely drapes over his stone gray eyes and usually has gel in it. His mouth is usually twisted into a smirk, but you can see him frown or smile every now and again. You can barely see his ears due to his hair, but they're just a tad bit too big for his face, which is why probably why his hair covers it. His hair also covers a light scar on the right side of his forehead. You would think it was from a fight or something, but it's from hitting his head on a table when he was about 2 when he first learned to run. There's also a big scar on his leg from when he fell off his broom learning to fly at home. He got distracted and fell off onto a tree branch. There are also very little scars from having acne. What teenager doesn't, right?
He plays Quidditch, so Draco is pretty built. He's rather skinny, but his body is toned. He stands at 5' 6" at 15 years old, so he's rather tall. He wears a size 8 shoe. He can be seen wearing black shoes, black pants and a nice shirt, even out of his robes. He's not much for jeans during the school year. He'll wear them on a Hogmeade trip once in a while, or at a non-formal event. He likes to wear T-shirts under his robes, mostly black or white ones. He's also not a fan of colors. He thinks he looks better in black or white. So yes, black slacks and a T-shirt are his out of robes favorites.
MOST LIKED FEATURE: His determination.
MOST HATED FEATURE: His personality.
HERITAGE: English/British
ETHNICITY: Caucasian


"The mind is not a book, to be opened at will and examined at leisure."



GENERAL PERSONALITY: Draco is a bully, plain and simple. He loves to pick on people and torture them. He's made people cry before. Those were the best days. He will go out of his way to make you feel like a horrible person. Unless you're a pureblood Slytherin. If you are one and he hates you, you must have done something pretty bad, or stupid.
He hates mudbloods and muggles the most. You probably won't see him outside of the wizarding world. He will torture you more than he would a half-born or worthless purebloods who throw away their lineage. So, you probably won't want to meet him if you're not a Slytherin pureblood.
Flying was his thinking time. He would fly for the rest of his life if he could. If he was flying on his own, you knew that you should not even try and talk to him. He would smile while flying, even if his thoughts were dark and moody. Most of the time he would think about where his life was going. . He had to live up to the Malfoy name.
Draco is caught between what HE wants, and what his family wants for him. He recently got the Dark Mark on his arm. He was willing to get it, up until it happened. He then realized the responsibilities and tasks that come along with being a full-fledged Death Eater. He wasn't sure if he was up to what they wanted him to do. He knew he wasn't up to it. He was a jackass, but he wasn't that horrible.
He is a loner. He doesn't like to do things in teams or in pairs. He had been on his own for years due to his parents being gone all the time. He fends for himself. He does this also because he is afraid to get too close to people. He lost a lot of friends and others in the past. He wasn't strong enough to keep losing people.
If you are one his friends, he is a very loyal friend. He will have your back in a fight or just give you advice, but the advice may not work. He has close friends that he will be there for until the end. He loves animals, but he won't show it. When he's flying by himself, you will see a real smile. He loves to just be up in the air.
HOBBIES: Torturing people, smirking, picking fights.
DISLIKES: Mudbloods, muggles, Harry Potter, losing, poor people, being wrong, stupidity.
LIKES: Purebloods, wealth, popularity, Potions, glory, fame, winning, Quidditch.
FEARS: The Dark Lord and his father.
SECRETS: He kind of regrets getting the Dark Mark, he's very scared of his father, he's a little jealous of Harry Potter.


"I enjoyed the meetings, too. It was like having friends."



GENERAL HISTORY: Draco Malfoy was born to Lucius and Narcissa Malfoy. The Malfoys are a wealthy, pureblooded family that took pride in their heritage. They were born to be the best and didn't care to get in their way. Draco grew up being taught that and it has stuck in his brain ever since. He would get disciplined in manners his father chose. Whether it was the belt or cane. It wasn't abuse as many would like to think. It was discipline, so it didn't happen if Draco did not misbehave.
He was taught house-elves were the lowest life form and to only order them around, nothing more. Also taught to him was to hate mudblood and muggles. They weren't as high and mighty as they were. They were a disgrace in their eyes. Draco believed all of this, but not as much as his parents did. When the Dark Lord was "defeated" by a baby Harry Potter, Lucius made sure his family stayed the loyalist followers.
Growing up, he was taught to respect his elders, especially the Dark Lord. His father was only there some of the time, mostly to teach him the dark ways and punish him. Lucius worked and was doing Death Eater duties a lot of the time, so Draco was normally on his own. You can say his mean personality comes from abandonment. He's taking it out on everyone else.
Draco saw a lot of people get killed. Even before he went to Hogwarts he had seen death. He secludes himself because of that fact. He doesn't like to get too close to people because he's afraid something will happen and he will lose them. He's not a jerk because he wants to be. He's a jerk so no one will know what he's seen. He doesn't want to lose anybody. He had had a best friend that was a muggle. It was when he was very little and didn't understand what trouble he was getting himself into. The Dark Lord ordered the muggles family be killed, Draco's friend included. From that point on Draco knew he couldn't be friendly with non-purebloods. Or anyone for that matter.
When he got his letter to Hogwarts, the first thing Draco did was call out Harry Potter, making sure he knew where his place was. Of course, being the "Boy Who Lived", Potter became the one everyone liked. From the day the met, they were enemies. Draco made sure to go even more out of his way than usual to torture him.
Draco got the Dark Mark recently, but he's not so sure what he thinks of it. He mainly did it to abide to his father's wishes. He was sworn in now, so there wasn't much he could do about it anyways. He would just have to live with it.
FAMILY: Lucius Malfoy-Father, Narcissa Malfoy-Mother.


"Make way for the heir of Slytherin, seriously evil wizard coming through..."



ROLEPLAY SAMPLE: Draco slammed his hand against the wall for the fourth time. He hated himself. He hated himself for letting them do that to him. What was he supposed to do though? Tell them he didn't want the Dark Mark? He'd rather get the mark then go through the punishment if he didn't. It was times like these that he really hated being a Malfoy. Being born into a destiny wasn't the best way he wanted to spend his life. Sure, he was set on money and fame. Was it really worth it though?
Sitting down on his bed, he dropped his head into his hands. This is who he was now. There was no going back. There was no changing it. He could run away. Run away and never come back. Start a new life somewhere far away. That was doubtful. Someone would find him somehow. He'd be in major trouble for that. One of the 3 Unforgivable Curses would have his name on it. Two of them probably would at that point in time.
Deciding he needed some fresh air, he slipped on his shoes and opened his door. He took a peek out before actually leaving his room. Of course, no one was there. He sighed, leaving his room and descending down the stairs. He looked at all the family pictures and laughed. Fake. The loving family pictures were fake. Shaking his head, he opened the back door, only to see his black cat Raven run inside. Smiling to himself, he gave her a pet or two before heading outside.
He grabbed his broom from where it was leaning against the house. He mounted it and kicked off, loving the wind in his hair. He had stopped gelling it so much because it just made it super oily. Plus, it was nice to feel it move around when he flew. Flying was his getaway from the world. It made him feel like a person. Not knowing where he was going, he decided to just do some circling around. He couldn't go anywhere. He needed to go to sleep early tonight. And anyways, thinking to himself was getting him no where. He felt better, until he landed in the back yard and put his broom back. He still was torturing himself on the inside.
Stepping back into the house and heading up to his room, he knew heneeded to take his anger out on someone other than himself. He knew exactly who to. He would have to wait until the next day though. That's when he would go back to school. He knew exactly who he would pick on there. Smirking to himself, he lay down on his bed and closed his eyes. He couldn't wait to go back to school.


"Reading between the lines, I’d say she thinks you’re a bit conceited, mate."



NAME: Megan
AGE: 20
GENDER: Female
YEARS ROLEPLAYING: 6
LOCATION: Montana (:
HOW DID YOU FIND US: Advertised on another site.

[LILY JANE POTTER]

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• The general appearance is not detailed enough, perhaps go into more detail about Draco’s dress sense, and scars or blemishes he may have etc etc.
  
• I ask for five or more likes and dislikes, perhaps think about bulking them up a bit to develop your character.
  
• Also I ask for two or more secrets again to help develop your character.
  
• Perhaps think about developing Dracos personality so we see a little more of the softer side of him.
  
• Again with the history think about developing this more include important events in Dracos life that we as readers don’t know about from the books.
  
• The role play sample isn’t long enough, this is an advanced role play site, we ask for around 450 words per post for a canon character. I understand sometimes this may going slightly under on an off day, but 450 on average is requested.
  

Admin Note: You are a good writer and have some nice ideas you just need to develop them, and don’t be afraid to use your imagination.

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[DRACO MALFOY]

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[LILY JANE POTTER]

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Admin Note:

Okay so basically on reading this I feel like you have a small understanding of the character, there are a lot of under lying issues with his character that I feel you haven’t really touched on. Also I understand this is an Au role play site but there are some things in your application I find hard to believe fit Draco’s character. The history is a great place to explore Draco as a character but you don’t really seem to touch on much of this. His personality also comes across to me as a bit mismatched, and important parts of his personality seemed to have been missed. As Draco is such a huge canon I feel that currently this application isn’t ready for accepting, I’m going to leave it as pending and ask that you really work on it this time round. If you feel you are unable to do this perhaps a lesser known canon or an oc would be more suitable to you for now.

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[DRACO MALFOY]

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There are currently just too many things that are out of character for this to be accepted. The quite a few of the above issues still apply. I think it might beneficial for you to create an original character then perhaps at a later date to try again with Draco.

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