Sarah Arianna Dragon [Finished]

[sarah]

The Revolution Has Begun

"There's no need to call me sir Professor."



FULL NAME:Sarah Arianna Dragon
NICKNAMES: Arianna
AGE: 30
BIRTHDAY:March 13th
SEXUALIY: Heterosexual
BLOODLINE: Pure blood
HOUSE: Hufflepuff
YEAR: She graduated
JOB: Head of Hufflepuff, Flight teacher
SIDE: Neutral currently
Magical ABILITIES:Sarah like all witches has the power of magic, she however was profoundly gifted in defense against the Dark arts, she perfected the Patronus in her fourth year at Hogwarts that takes form of a Giant Hawk, however since the death of her husband Sarah’s patronus is a lot smaller than she used to. Sarah’s patrunos can also speak as well, Sarah of course can use other types of magic, and she is able to use non verbal magic too & is classified for appiration, but she doesn’t use it much she would rather use muggle transport than apperate or broom.
CANON: Original


"You don't know what I'm capable of, you don't know what I've done!"



GENERAL APPEARANCE:
Sarah is 5,6 feet tall and weighs 105 pounds, she has hazel colored eyes, and is Caucasian with no scars or tattoos.she has long brown hair, but sometimes changes it to light blond. Sarah walks with confidence and she has a smile that is described as cocky and mischievous, Sarah

Sarah often wears muggle type clothing, she will wear dresses, but most likely she wears jeans and different colored tops she doesn’t feel comfortable in robes. Sarah has no set style she will wear whatever she wants to wear. Sarah still wears her wedding ring that her husband gave her. On the wedding day, she has never taken it off. Sarah also wears a necklace her husband gave her and also never takes it off.
MOST LIKED FEATURE: nothing
MOST HATED FEATURE: everything
HERITAGE: English
ETHNICITY: Caucasian,


"The mind is not a book, to be opened at will and examined at leisure."



GENERAL PERSONALITY: Sarah is somewhat optimistic and very friendly, she cares about her friends and often treats them like family. Sarah has a habit of ignoring other people’s advice and does things her own way which usually works out with the outcome being better than predicted. Sarah loves to sing and play her guitar she has lots of fun dressing up and going shopping and redecorating her home.

Sarah loves shopping at expensive stores in large shops as well as party, she often buys clothing for her friends and rarely wears anything twice, Sarah has no problem with Money since she makes a lot of money from her albums Sarah can be a bit reclusive and quiet at times

Sarah can be extremely stubborn and refuses to give up, she has a temper and is described as brutal when someone pushes her to the edge. She is reckless at times and has no sense of fear other than loosing a loved one. That’s how the muggles knows Sarah. Sarah as a witch is completely different, she is strong and gifted with magic, Sarah is protective over her students and is very much a disciplinarian, she will scold students for misbehaving, and she will not let her student’s pity themselves for their situation.

Sarah will help her students and treat them like they were her own family, no matter what house they were in. Sarah can be very bitter at times in reguards to the ministry if magic. and has a very deep rage, when she and an explosive temper that often frightens those around her. when she looses it things around her tend to go boom

Sarah loves her little sister very much and wishes to find out what happened to her which is one of the reasons why she came out of exile and have taken up post as head of hufflepuff. Sarah is also known to the ministry of magic due to the fact she was an Auror, Sarah holds hostility and has no trust for the ministry of magic due to the fact they chose to cut a deal with the man who murdered her husband.

Sarah is still suffering from the loss of her husband, even though it was three years ago, she often speaks to him although it is a figment of her imagination to cope. Sarah hates herself greatly for not being able to save her husband and has felt lost and only half complete since his death.


HOBBIES:
1. Reading
2. Writing
3. Singing
4. watching movies
5. Practicing magic without her wand

DISLIKES:
1. Death eaters
2. Smug students
3. burned food
4. Ministry of magic

LIKES:
1. playing her guitar
2. The muggle world
3. Rainy weather
4. kids
5. Music

FEARS:
1. Her sister is dead
2. Her students getting harmed
3. snakes

SECRETS:
1. Despite getting married Sarah is still a virgin
2. Sarah often talks to her husband as a form of coping with her loss, even though he is a figment of her imagination.


"I enjoyed the meetings, too. It was like having friends."



GENERAL HISTORY: Sarah Dragon is the eldest daughter of Auror Carlisle Warren & Healer Isabella Warren, she grew up living a happy childhood and blessed with the gift of magic, She was raised in London, England. at the age of 10 Sarah received her letter to Hogwarts school of witchcraft and wizardry, she was thrilled and as soon as she bought her text books and wand she started to read her text books learning about history.

When Sarah started Hogwarts she broke family tradition, her family had long since been sorted into griffindor since her ancestors. Sarah however secretly asked to be placed in hufflepuff simply because she felt like she belonged there, By the time She started her education she found herself to be more advanced than her peers which surprised everyone, including her teachers since she had the talent to be in slytherin or ravenclaw based on her knowledge of magic.

Sarah's years at Hogwarts weren’t really eventful she never participated in anything other than dueling club. The rest of the time Sarah studied which gave her, Amazing grades, getting to the top of her year in O.W.L in the sixth year she met Felix Whitlock. A wizard in Ravenclaw, he matched her academically much to Sarah’s anger. Sarah considered Felix a rival and for the next two years they battled it out for N.E.W.T.S and the two ended up tying in grades. Once they both graduated they parted ways.

Sarah went on to become an Auror, she trained for two years under her friend & Mentor Taylor Dragon where they eventually fell in love. At the age of twenty Sarah & Taylor had gotten married and became husband and wife, her little sister Courtney was her flower girl.

It seemed Sarah's joy was not meant to last when Demetri Campbell a death eater attacked the two on the night of their honeymoon. Sarah survived when Taylor used himself to shield Sarah from the killing curse. In a fit of rage Sarah totaled the hotel room and as a result of that captured the man who ruined her life. Sarah wanted justice, she demanded her husbands killer faced the dementor's kiss, but he never received it, in fact he was set free when he sold out the death eaters and dark wizards affiliated with them.

Sarah was angry being robbed of her revenge and the justice for her husband’s murder, Sarah lost faith in the ministry of magic and quit being an Auror, Sarah tried to cope with her loss, but she couldn’t do it she eventually blamed herself for surviving, for not being strong enough to take out the death eater. Sarah left chose to left the magical world forever; she cut herself off and went to live in the muggle world. Sarah’s Adjustment to the muggle world was hard, but in time she grew to admire their strength that they could survive without magic, they formed knowledge through hard work.

Sarah was lost in the muggle world and at first she found herself a job as a waitress and survived on her small paycheck and tips, with the muggle friends she made, she was encouraged to try out for the a talent show, Sarah eventually tried out with her friends and she tried singing, and she ended up winning second place, Sarah was given a record deal and released her first album Breakaway.

Sarah had become wealthy and she was proud, she achieved so much and didn’t need magic Sarah spent the next three years touring the muggle world, making money from her cds and living life as a muggle, she kept her wand & Magical belongings safe in her mansion’s safe. Sarah although she embraced muggle life sarah felt she did not belong, she has never gone on a date or a relationship and she never contacted her family.

One evening Sarah returned to her home only to find a wizard official telling her that her mother was murdered and her sister has gone missing from Hogwarts and she maybe a target. Sarah was in shock to learn that her mother was dead and her sister was missing, with that Sarah did something she never wanted to do again, she opened the safe and took out her wand and other magical belongings. Sarah knew she would not be returning to the muggle world any time soon, and told her manager that she was going off to write a new album somewhere far off and left no number or address.

Afterwards she returned to the magical world and managed to get a teaching job at Hogwarts, she became the head of hufflepuff and decided to try and find out who abducted her sister & why.

FAMILY:

Carlisle Warren: Carlisle was a very powerful Auror, he worked hard catching dark wizards, but ended up being taken out by two dark wizards, leaving his family behind, he was 60 when he was killed

Isabella Warren: Isabella was a very skilled witch in herboligy, she ended up finishing Hogwarts and becoming a healer at the fourth floor spell damage, she was murdered with the killing curse at the age 57.

Courtney Pie Warren: Courtney is Sarah’s little sister Sarah calls her little sister Pie rather than her first name, Sarah loves her big sister After her husband was murdered Sarah left her family behind and went to live in the muggle world swearing never to do magic again. Courtney was 5 at the time and hasn’t seen or heard from her sister since then. During Courtney’s first year at Hogwarts she mysteriously vanished, she is currently 10 yrs old & sorted into griffindor

Taylor Dragon: Sarah’s Husband he was an Auror working for the ministry of magic, he was estranged from his family due to his parents beliefs that muggles were filthy and so were mudbloods. Taylor never spoke to sarah about his family, but was madly in love with her, he was taken out by Demetri Cambell unknown to Sarah Demetri was actually Taylor’s cousin. Taylor was 39 at the time of his death.


"Make way for the heir of Slytherin, seriously evil wizard coming through..."



ROLEPLAY SAMPLE: Sarah looked at the night time sky as she sat at the back of her yard her land was quite large thanks to all those Cd’s she sold had earned her a lot of muggle money. It had been five years since the death of her beloved husband Taylor and she left the magic world behind her, Sarah was scorned by the justice she and her husband had dedicated to uphold. How was there justice on the day she became the wife of Taylor Dragon, she became a widow. Sarah looked at the stars and made a fist her anger continued to grow from the injustice of it and the lamp beside her flickered for a moment.

Sarah sighed and tried to calm herself down she slowly sat up on her beach chair and leaned over the room lights in her mansion were on, and everything was normal. Sarah laid back down she turned her head to the side of the empty beach chair beside her and she closed her eyes for a second and when she reopened them there he was, the love of her life Taylor, Sarah smiled and looked at him he looked like he did before his death short blond hair with dazzling green eyes, he wore dress robes the same ones when they got married, emerald green that brought out the color of his eyes. “why so worried spitfire, the ministry wont be able to track you…your trace has long been broken.” He spoke his voice was alluring, she smiled she hated the nickname he had given her and he knew it “Don’t call me that Taylor you know I hate it when you call me spitfire….and you know im not worried about the ministry, I have long since cut off all ties to the magical world” she spoke answering his question.

Sarah continued to look at her beautiful husband “come on Sarah do you really think cutting yourself off from magic will make things right, magic is a part of who you are, and by denying magic your denying yourself.” Sarah looked at her husband, he had given her wisdom and guidance like he always had just like when he was training her to be an Auror, her partner and he became her best friend and her lover….her heart and soul her entire world and then she lost it.

Sarah felt her heart pound against her chest when she felt the wounds of her shattered heart cut open a new, she had many times thought about obliviating her own memories, but having no memories of taylor to erase their time together and their short short time of husband and wife would have been an insult to his memory. Sarah noticed the lamp light shatter and she flinched, she sat up and looked back to the house to see the lights of her mansion shatter one after another. Sarah jumped up and looked at her home the lights going off and the distant sound of the light bulb shattering worried her “sounds like trouble is waiting for you, be careful sarah.” Sarah made a fist she said nothing back.

She knew someone or something was in her home, she walked into her darkened home wandless and defenseless or so it would seemed, was she afraid of death, no dying it seemed to take forever she was left with the pain of loss that was consuming her slowly little by little. Sarah walked through the kitchen slowly and picked up a steak knife and held it tightly, she slowly walked into the living room and she saw the back of someone in a dark cloak she felt her heart pound in her chest as her grip on the knife tightened “well well an unexpected visitor what a surprise.” She spoke bitterly

Sarah watched as the cloaked being turned around and raised it’s hand with a wand being raised with it, Sarah threw her knife only to see a stream of light come from the wand that disintegrated her steak knife Sarah looked at her intruder another stream of light came from the wand and blasted Sarah into the wall Sarah gasped on impact and coughed out some blood as she slided onto the ground her back still against the wall, she tried to see her attackers face, but thanks to the darkness of the surroundings and the hood the attacker had she could not see his face.

Sarah could see the attacker coming closer to her as the seconds passed her anger boiling as she picked herself up “oh that does it” she spun around on a spot and her body apperated white smoke surrounded her body as she moved past the intruder knocking him down and going upstairs inside her safe room, a room where she had swore never to enter for it had all of her magical belongings, the smoke vanished and she rushed towards a long thin black box. Picking the box up Sarah opened it to see her wand, she had picked it up and she held it “Give them hell Sarah” she heard the voice of taylor softly speaking Sarah smiled mischievously and opened her eyes she pointed to the safe door and yelled out “Expulso” the safe door blew up and went flying and she apperated out of the room, it was meaningless destruction, but it felt good to cause some mayhem. Sarah aperated in front of her intruder.

She looked at her intruder “your in trouble now, you want to know why? The sleeper has awoken and she is seriously pissed off.” Sarah roared she tightened her grip on her wand and raised it the intruder launched out a white light at her using non verbal magic and Sarah casted the protego charm to protect her from the spell, using non verbal magic. The spell bounced off sarah and hit the ceiling creating a hole. Sarah and the intruder both casted the impedimenta spell knocking them both back a great distance. Sarah had collided into her dinner table and it snapped she groaned out in pain and after a few seconds she sat up “lets get this straight, before I obliviate you your going to pay for the steak knife, the hole in my ceiling and MY DINNER TABLE” she snarled out and launched out a knockback curse. The intruder had just got up when he was sent into a wall. Sarah had blood streaming down her arm from a gash in her shoulder.

The witch limped towards her attacker and he spoke “Stop sarah its me Alec” Sarah stopped and watch in surprise as her attacker pulled down the hood of his cloak and she saw a former friend of hers an auror “Alec what the hell are you doing breaking into my home and attacking me.” She roared “Im sorry I had to see if you were still the same Sarah.” Sarah’s fist tightened “not good enough” she raised her wand hand and yelled “Expulso” Alec dived out of the way as the wall he was leaning on blew a hole through it. Sarah looked at alec as he picked himself up “well at least your temper hasn’t changed.” Sarah pointed her want at alec and nonverbally used the expelliumas spell to blast the wand out of his hand. “real reason alec or so help me the next spell will not miss.” She spoke seriously. “Alright….Sarah the ministry needs you…these are dark times and we need all the help we can get, you were one of the best Auror’s there were along with…” Sarah fired off a shot inches in front of her old friend “don’t you dare say his name, you and none of the other ministry have the right to say the name of the man they betrayed the name of the man who’s memory they insulted.” She spoke her hand was trembling as her eyes were watery she was holding back tears.

Sarah lowered her hand “I severed all ties to the ministry and those whom are affiliated with them, I will never help those who disrespected my husbands memory….Alec…we were once comrades, so I am going to spare you today, but you go back to those filthy backstabbing filthy snakes that they can ask help of the one who killed my husband, and if you or any other ministry affiliated witch or wizard return I vow I will be dueling to kill do you HEAR ME….now get lost I have a lot of mess to clean up.” She spoke bitterly.

Sarah turned her back on alec and began to walk away when he spoke out “Sarah there is more….your family….your mother has been murdered and your sister is missing.” Sarah stopped dead in her tracks, she had no idea how to react her mother was murdered and her sister was gone. Sarah turned to face Alec and stormed off towards him “tell me everything you know Alec.” She demanded. Sarah listened in horror her mother was murdered by the sleazebag that murdered her husband and her sister getting off train to hogwarts. “So you see Sarah we need your help.” Alec spoke, Sarah was quiet for a moment “No I mean it I am through with the ministry, I will find my sister on my own, and if your so desperate for help then go to that death eater filth who you cut a deal with, but if I was you I would hurry, because once I find my sister I will murder him and I promise you it will be a slow and agonizing death, now get out of my home your kind is not welcome here.” Alec looked surprised for a moment before disappearing

2 weeks latter

Sarah had left behind her mansion and the rest of the muggle world, her carrier as a singer would probably end now, but that didn’t matter what mattered was finding her baby sister Courtney and finding out the truth of what happened. Sarah hated the fact to do that she had to return to the world she swore never to be apart of. The magical world, Sarah knew that she would have to adjust to being just a normal person again and not a celebrity, the only people who would regognize her as a singer in the muggle world would be muggleborns and perhaps the odd wizards who liked to immense themselves in the muggle world, but then again she was an odd one to talk.

Sarah stood at the gates of Hogwarts holding a suitcase and dressed in jeans, a black top and a black leather jacket. She had her necklace around her neck and the wedding ring on her finger. She was standing at her old school because she had landed the job of becoming head of hufflepuff along with being the flight teacher. The witch knew in order to find out what happened to Courtney she would have to find what she did at Hogwarts and who she knew. Sarah watched as the gates opened, she knew by now that the students would be finished with classes for the day and there was a good chance she would .encounter a few of them. The witch had made it to the office and was escorted to her bedroom once she entered she threw her suitcase on the bed and left leaving the bedroom she walked out to the first flaw and left to go to the courtyard still dressed in muggle clothing.


"Reading between the lines, I’d say she thinks you’re a bit conceited, mate."



NAME: faith
AGE:25
GENDER: male
YEARS ROLEPLAYING: not long
LOCATION: australia
HOW DID YOU FIND US: through an affiliate

[JONATHAN MARTIN QUINN]

Just a note from us admins, the 'true power' will not be accepted. Have spoken with Slayer about this and we are both agreed on this. It isn't canon and it is a bit too overpowered to be allowed.

[JONATHAN MARTIN QUINN]

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To Improve:

• Appearance:
  
  The appearance is lacking in many areas; it seems very one dimensional and I don't feel any essence of what the character looks like.
  
  Go into more depth about how she looks, how long is her hair? Is it soft, wavy curly? Do the same with her eyes, what kind of hazel are they, are they round eyes or square, what about her face? Does she have any spots or freckles?
  
  What about her body shape, is she a hour glass figure, rounded etc. Also if she is going to be a teacher she HAS to wear some form of formal wear; she wouldn't be allowed to teach in jeans and a top and would most likely either wear robes or a suit.
  
  Also there has to be something she likes about her appearance; even the most self concious people who lack self esteem etc [and I know as I am one of these people and have many a friend who is similar] have at least one thing about them that they like.
  
  
• Personality:
  
  She treats her friends like family but won't listen to their advice? It seems a bit strange and it also sounds like she is always right and that her own advice is the best; please edit this.
  
  I'm not sure what you are getting at with the singing/guitar/albums, please go into more depth about this and why she loves it so much
  
  No fear apart from loosing someone? Please edit this to having little fear otherwise it's just a contradiction
  
  You have to have at least 5 dislikes, please add one in
  
  How is she married and still a virgin? When you get married you are filled with passion and love for the other person I doubt the two would have continued to not be intimate with one another
  
  
• History
  
  I'm sorry but being more advanced then her years is a little too much. She can be clever and read a lot but even Hermionie who studied hard and was top of her class was never really beyond her years; she was hard working and impressed people only because she was a muggle. I'm going to ask you to edit this please as it seems a bit too over powered
  
  Please expand on her and her husband meeting, it seems a bit of a bulletpoint moment. How long did they date for? What was it like when he proposed etc.
  
  It seems highly unlikely that she would win a contest and get a record deal; these things rarely happen in real life and although Harry Potter isn't real life it still feels a bit far fetched
  
  It seems like one disaster after another; try and add in some happier stuff, at the moment its borderline mary sue and her history doesn't really match with her happy personality.
  
  Also after reading the history i noticed that she is no longer married and her husband was killed on their honeymoon which would of course explain why she is still a virgin. However if he her husband is dead even if she is still grieving over him she would be a widow not married so please can you edit this.
  
  
• Grammar:
  
  There are some grammar issues in your application and some spelling mistakes. Try reading your app out loud and you will see what I mean =]
  

Admin Note:
Over all this needs a lot of work but rather then going straight for the cut and denying you I'm going to give you a shot at editing this. Your rp sample was good and i think you could be an interesting addition to the site and we could always use a few more teachers. If you have any questions please PM one of the staff members
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