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Post by MARIAN ESTRAYA LUPIN on Apr 10, 2011 18:50:35 GMT
The Revolution Has Begun
"There's no need to call me sir Professor."
FULL NAME: Marian Estraya Lupin NICKNAMES: Mary, An AGE: 11 BIRTHDAY: May 25th 1984 SEXUALIY: Straight BLOODLINE: Half-blood HOUSE: Hufflepuff YEAR: 1st JOB: Student SIDE: Order supporter SPECIES/SPECIAL ABILITIES: Witch and werewolf CANON: Yes.
"You don't know what I'm capable of, you don't know what I've done!"
GENERAL APPEARANCE: Marian got a very weird hair color compared to the rest of the Lupins. She thinks it may have been because maybe her mom had her hair black at the time she was pregnant with her. She looks very older then her actual age; she appears closer to 14 then 11, which is very odd. She is taller than a lot of the first years and already has a figure. She keeps her black hair down, which frames her face because of its slick nature. She has dark brown eyes like her father and also inherited the pale skin because of her werewolfism. She likes to wear mostly black which makes her look almost gothic or Emo, a Slytherin even. But looks can be deceiving; she’s kind and very nice. Not even close to Emo or Goth. MOST LIKED FEATURE: Her most liked feature would HAVE to be her hair. She adores her long slick black hair she thinks it's the prettiest thing about her. MOST HATED FEATURE: Her height is her biggest "what if?" she hates being taller than the other first years, it makes her feel like a giant in the middle of a bunch of goblins. HERITAGE: English ETHNICITY: Caucasian
"The mind is not a book, to be opened at will and examined at leisure."
GENERAL PERSONALITY: Marian is such a weird girl, because at first some people can say she is mean, high-strung and tough, but other people say she is a very nice, funny and laid-back girl. They are both true, it just really depends on what day and mood this kid is in. When Marian is in one of her nice moods, she will show her manners to everyone and will help them to know end but will also joke around and kid once in a while. If Marian is having a very bad day, it is best to say away from her all together.
She HATES liars and cheaters if you do anything to lie or cheat her in anyway; you will get your face pounded in... HARD. It is one of her pet peeves.
Mary loves sports of all kind. Mostly football (soccer in America or Canada) and Quidditch though. She loves football because it's a precise game. If you don't aim correctly enough you don't score, and Mary loves a challenge like this, same with Quidditch. Though she loves sports she isn't one for a mud filled game. She’s not very fond of mud.
She loves to spend time in front of the mirror, to make sure that her hair is nice, but she is not vain, she is just like every young lady likes to spend some time in front of the mirror. Mary also loves to party, but she also loves to spend time around children. She does have a hard time trusting anyone, but mainly boys, if she does trust you; you have a very loyal and trustworthy friend on your hands. She will open up after a little while though. HOBBIES: Reading, having fun, flying and football DISLIKES: Liars, Cheaters, people making fun of her, her brother (sometimes), stringed beans, hawks, Potions class and Slytherins LIKES: Truthful people, making people laugh, seeing people happy, helping, having fun, chocolate, singing, dancing, the color black, her sister and being different FEARS: The Dark Lord taking over, her family dying, hawks and not having her sister to help her SECRETS: That she is a werewolf (only her family knows this) and she is secretly afraid of hawks
"I enjoyed the meetings, too. It was like having friends."
GENERAL HISTORY: Little Marian Estraya Lupin was born to Remus and Nymphadora Lupin on May 25th 1984, she was a quiet baby and rarely cried unless it was urgent. She grew up in the best family she thought she possibly could... until one day. She was 2 years old and Remus had his "furry problem" due. Marian being Marian wasn't the snoop-ish type. She was usually always inside the house when "it" happened, never daring to look outside in case her daddy was right there.
But she was going through her "curious phase" at the time, Piper was asleep on the couch and Luke was well. Luke was Luke and he most likely wouldn't bother to see what she was doing anyway. She opened her window -with much effort for a two year old. - And hopped out, waddling to her father's hide-out. When she looked up to look at the moon, something she assumed was pretty since she had never seen it before, everything went black before she could even take a peek at the "pretty moon" and suddenly there was a searing pain as something bit through her leg and then she was a little monster on all fours.
She barely remembers the rest of that night only that she woke up on her doorstep to her mother's screaming voice, her daddy crying "I was too late, I should have been smart enough to hear him!" Luke saying Greyback got his revenge already on their father already and Piper asking why did he have to come back?
Two years later, at age four, she had finally learned to DRINK her wolfsbane, not spit it on Luke. By now she was the spoiled daughter because Remus felt it was his fault she was a werewolf and wanted to make up for that. Though, Marian was done her "MINE!" phase and she no longer wanted anything. She was fine with just playing pretend, though clearly Remus did not see that. She refused anything she gave him unless it was chocolate or candy.
By age 6 she was already in her "leave me alone" phase, one of which normally you would be in at 12 years old. But Remus was driving her that way, she tried everything she could to cheer him up, she didn't like seeing anyone sad, but nothing worked. And she no longer had the help of her sister, Piper who was off at Hogwarts nowadays. Seeing her daddy like that put her down in the dumps too, this did not help with how her mother felt, or her brother.
Age 8 was when she felt her worse. She could understand everything around her now, and she didn't like it, she wished she could get away from all that, be like her siblings her were free of the devestation at home. She really couldn't believe her dad still felt guilty about it all, it was 6 years ago, her mom was better though. She spent most of her time with her, which made her feel worse about her dad because she felt she was neglecting him. But she kept on struggling with the werewolf thing, the year went by as normal as did the next... but she was in for a surprise when she turned ten.
In 1994, Marian turned 10, that is when she finally learned what was bothering her father so badly. You-Know-Who was back, now, Marian had heard stories about him, and she never really thought they were true though. She was always by her daddy's side now, helping him along the way, trying to cheer him up with more thought into it now then when she was six and she was half-way there to bringing his hopes up, she wished she could stay and help him longer but she knew her school year was drawing nearer and she would have to leave her father behind.
Hogwarts he she came. Her mother was all excited for her school time to come, her father not so much. Nymphadora Lupin went off and got all the stuff Marian would need at school while she went and got her very first wand. She walked out of that store with a pine and unicorn tail hair wand, she was very pleased with herself, and she could finally learn what her family had for years.
When Marian arrived at the school, she was over-joyed but still had her dad on her mind. When she walked up to the stool and placed the sorting hat on her head, as soon as it touched her black-haired head it yelled out "HUFFLEPUFF!" again, she was very pleased, she was in her mother's house. The only down-side: Luke.
FAMILY: Nymphadora Lupin Née Tonks (mother), Remus Lupin (father), Luke Lupin (brother) and Piper Lupin (sister)
"Make way for the heir of Slytherin, seriously evil wizard coming through..."
ROLEPLAY SAMPLE: Bree was sitting in the Cullen home, she didn't feel like a part of it yet really, they were all so grown up compared to her and the human that was always around, the one they called Bella, how did they do it. Bree had some good control but sometimes she just had to get away from the scent of human blood she didn't have all of the control that she needed yet. Bree sighed slightly sitting on the couch in what could technically be called her bedroom. Alice and the other Cullen’s had gone about putting it together for her. She had a wall that was just ceiling to floor of books, lots and lots of books in all different genres and everything like that. She hadn't asked for it but she had told them she liked to read and they filled her room with them and there were obviously other things like the couch she had currently taken up residence on. She didn't leave her room very much aside from needing to feed and she always had to go with someone so that she wouldn't lose it if she came across some hiker.
Bree was still getting used to the way the Cullens worked like a family, Bree didn't get it all she knew of being a vampire was in that thing with the Army. Now here she was in a coven of them who weren't preparing for an army, they fed off of animal blood. Bree thought it was a good thing that she was starting to remember their names and things. Like Alice was the little one who was shorter than she was and could see the future. Alice was with Jasper who controlled moods and was helping her learn control. Emmett was the big one who was with the pretty blonde one who was named Rosalie. Carlisle was the one that fascinated her though he worked in a hospital how did he do it how could he stand being around human blood all the time like that. Carlisle was with Esme who was the one who acted like the mom Bree never had or never remembered having. And then there was Edward who could read her thoughts and he was with the human Bella who smelled really good.
"Reading between the lines, I’d say she thinks you’re a bit conceited, mate."
NAME: Just call me Alyssa AGE: 13 GENDER: female YEARS ROLEPLAYING: about a year LOCATION: Canada HOW DID YOU FIND US: in a link back thing on a site
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Post by LILY JANE POTTER on Apr 10, 2011 19:14:30 GMT
Pending ! [/color][/font] please insert corrections that need to be made good luck!
Hey this is a nice application I just have a few tiny suggestions.
To Improve:
- You say she likes soccer, well i’m from the uk and I will tell you that we don’t have soccer here, so I doubt Marian would play it. We play football, so it make it more British I’d say change it to football, or if you want something more rough, women’s rugby.
- Reread through your work cause there are a few spelling mistakes, it happens to us all i’m awful at it, but just recheck it as best you can.
- Could you please put a role play sample in as this is your first character on the site, it’s just a requirement we ask everyone.
Admin Note: That is all! Just edit the things I’ve suggested, can’t wait to have you on the site.
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Post by LILY JANE POTTER on Apr 10, 2011 20:06:35 GMT
Accepted ! [/color][/font] congratulations! you've been accepted at revolution claim your face claim! go fill in the sign-ups and post a plot page, get roleplaying! and have some fun! - ADMINS -
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